I've recently released chapter 1 of my first manga. You can read it here: https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/nv2406050409186040026482849/I'd appreciate if you'd be able to leave a like if you enjoyed it or leave a comment on Manga Plus Creators or down here on what you thought of it and what I could improve on. 19343a

Not bad. Art's able. I didn't feel confused as to where the movement was going. Story obviously feels incomplete. Don't know if this is intentional, or if you intend to continue this work. I was expecting the girl to suddenly become some badass getaway driver, but it's your story, not mine. Overall i'd give it like a solid 5 out of 10 purely on the aspect that it's too short to care about these people, there's no resolution, and the situation is kinda vague. If there's a chapter 2 incoming, I'll 6/10.

I left the same comment on your other platform just to prove that your effort to reach out to Manga Updates wasn't totally in vain.

Thanks for the . Yeah there will be more chapters incoming, I'm currently working on and writing chapter 2.