Just an ordinary story about two grade schoolers and a cute little serow… 432z48
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I didn't really like this all that much. The plot wasn't even all that good and the characters' personalities were kind of basic and not all that great to be honest. The girl was just manipulative and the boy was dumb enough to actually like her at the end.
Well this was a bit strange.
I can assume the girl liked the boy, and used the serow's fall to take advantage of that, but it was poorly done. It didn't come out quite like that, she was manipulative and deceitful and a bad person overall. It was a bit funny and that was that.
Um. Wut? I didn't like this one much. How did the little boy come to the conclusion that this bossy little manipulative girl was 'really a good person?' I'm sure the answer is in there somewhere, but it was just so annoying, rather than insightful, that I'm not motivated to look any deeper than a cursory glance.
The artwork and wording was plain and uninspiring.