Chapter 1Seemed really fast and no explanation. We'll see if it smooths out. gh2j

Chapter 2
The Order's behind all this, huh. So weird plot, also cheesy lines at last pages made me sick.

my boi how ya been did you miss me i came back from my family house wait me until to catch you

Ah, glad to see you again. I can wait for you. 😀

got it bro i am going to read it

Chapter 3
Well, that was too short. The Order giving children those implants seem wrong.

i finally be able to catch you lets read ch 4

Chapter 4
Wow! Wasn't expecting that everyone is dead, great killing sequence.

it was a big massacre

Yes, brutal and cruel one.

plot isnt understandable lets go ch5

Chapter 5
Great!! So, there are two evil organizations Safeguards and the order. Musabi and her new body only made her stronger to revolt against the Safeguards and the net sphere.

her new body dope i still didnt get anything

Me neither, looool.

lets go another ch